“Story of G” is in the home stretch:
Story of G:
- New Draft Wordcount: 833 net new words
- Other Notes Wordcount: 0 words
Book of M:
- Background Notes Wordcount: 0 words
Grand Total: 833 words
This was, hopefully, the penultimate week spent working exclusively on “Story of G”. I’m about 80% done with this revised draft. Even though I’m well into the section where I expected to delete a lot, I still ended up adding wordcount. The portions I deleted needed new segues and new parts to their scenes. One of the difficult things about this part is that I’ve had to delete some lines of dialog that I really liked because I cant fit them into the new structure of the story.
The ending of “Story of G” is where a lot of the most radical change is taking place. There was an extra scene added, and the final two scenes are undergoing some significant changes. Making some of those changes, however, I hit a wall that stopped me for most of one writing day. I couldn’t figure out how to move from one heavily-revised scene to the next. I’m still working through that new transition.
I also started a passive voice sweep of what I’ve written so far. That’s not something that’s very fun. Continue reading